A wildflower decided to hold her bloom,
wrapped herself in dense moss and thick
caramel sauce in order to protect her naked
costume. Ashamed of her beauty she hid in salvaged
storm and pretence adultery. She killed distant toffee
wrappers and kept nutty chocolate bars in the heeled
corner of crimson crowbars. Wary of sand
and water catching fire she slept on ice
trees and lit fire on bear skins with ancient
brooms. She concealed her moans, egged
his grunts, butchered his matchstick and walked
away on crescent moon. Years later I stood there mislaid
from my thruway, mussed as to why the scent of a
woman still lingered on that forlorn byway.
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Fantastic. So talented 🙂
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Thank you! 💖
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Wow that’s awesome
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Thank you. Glad you think this!
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🙂
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Love the way this is writeen 🙂 🙂
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*Written
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Thank you Gustaf!
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The Count, my dear
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The Count it is then!
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Wary of sand and water catching fire she slept on ice trees and lit fire on bear skins with ancient brooms.
MINDBLOWN!!! Lol. This particular line, no matter how much I rack my brain around it, makes no sense! Flabbergasted! Literally mind-blown!
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Haha…
the woman is so timid that she is scared of everything hence ‘wary of sand and water’ but at the same time she is so courageous that she can skin bears hence ‘bear skins’. And ‘ancient broom’ refers to witchery of old times. It’s like the witch is at work.:P
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Hmmmm. Wow! I see. Makes sense to me now. Gosh! I’m such a simpleton. Lol.
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Haha..no
I am just a bit overimaginative. 😛
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True that!!! 🙂
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Powerful and vivid in even emotions I reached for, a man trying, still the woman living here is beyond my fingertips like the” Mona Lisa ” or Ms. Sylvia’s “Daddy.” I reach in an everlasting wow. thank you.
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Hello. I nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award. You can play or not, the choice is yours. ;D https://dronstadblog.wordpress.com/2018/01/03/mystery-blogger-award-2
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Thank you for nominating. I appreciate it. Those questions of yours got me. I want to answer them now. 😛 Maybe I will. Let’s see.
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Do it in a post. There are rules… Unfortunately. 😀
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Haha.. Yes!
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So fun to read I love the usage of words
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Thank you Sustantivos!
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Oh wow – I loved the “butchered his matchstick bit” !!! Great work
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Hahaha… it was fun to write that part. Thank you!
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Lol I bet it was. Wush I had written it !
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Haha..you can write the same other ways. No limit to one’s imagination 😛
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Yay to imagination. Can be very satisfying lol
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😂😂
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The beginning lines made my taste buds dance !!😍 It was a vivid experience reading this outstanding work.. 😍😍
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Thank you. I am so glad it did. 🙂
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😊😊
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Woww..the way you compared with wild flowers and woman..and the imagery of surroundings is too good
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Thank you Kalyan! Glad you liked.
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OMG! I once wrote an exact poem with the same title. Looks like we have a lot in common or may be I am over reacting.
Nonetheless, your words are always beautiful.
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Hahaha..we do have so much in common. I would love to read that poem of yours.
Thanks for your love 💖💖
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Interesting choice of words and well composed. I admire the poets who have such well versed brain. Your stuff are fun to read. Keep that coming. 😀
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Thank you Dronstad. I will.
It is also fun for me to write such poems, playing with words and imagery. 😛
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☺️ a smiley would do na shikha☺️
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It would more than do. It will rock 🙂
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