I had a best friend. Had
him when I wore the lowercase shoes
from the uppercase emporium. Had
him when I was the small-fry pea
in the weighty peapod. I stole
his popping candies and paper hearts. Stole
treats from his purple lunchbox. I even stole
his hideous scarf with pompoms I knew he insisted
on wearing his first day to school. I stole
his narcissist girlfriend’s text. I stole
his GunsN’Roses jacket. I stole
his anger, swiped it with nonsense laughter
when his parents fought. I stole his everything.
His tears. His smile. His soul. Him.
But I have nothing now. He stole
everything back and more.
My tears. My smile. My soul. Me
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Disclaimer: All characters and situations (in poetry or fiction) on this site are fictitious unless specifically mentioned otherwise.
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I have fun with, result in I found exactly what I used to be having a look for. You’ve ended my 4 day lengthy hunt! God Bless you man. Have a great day. Bye
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It’s a woman this side😛 Nevertheless thank you for your kind words. God bless you! ✨
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hello!,I love your writing very much! percentage we keep up a correspondence extra about your post on AOL? I require a specialist in this house to unravel my problem. Maybe that is you! Having a look ahead to look you.
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Thank you Alex! I don’t have an exact idea of what your problem is, but I shall be happy to help you if I could.
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You really make it appear really easy together with your presentation however I to find this topic to be really something that I feel I would by no means understand. It sort of feels too complicated and very broad for me. I’m having a look ahead on your subsequent submit, I’ll try to get the cling of it!
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You actually make it seem really easy with your presentation but I find this matter to be actually something which I believe I’d never understand. It kind of feels too complicated and extremely wide for me. I’m taking a look ahead for your next submit, I will attempt to get the grasp of it!
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Thank you for your kind words! It really is a matter of how you interpret it. It can be às complicated as you want it to be and as easy as you pretend it to be!
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You write beautifully.
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Thanks Monika! Glad you like it.
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Wow so different and so beautiful
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Thank you Nancy!
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Your most welcome 😊
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Great poem, but the truth is that you scare me.
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I’ll reply to myself, was you who stole my underwear?
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sorry! Last I checked I couldn’t find your ‘Underwear’ 😛
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Probably some other guy took it…. evil
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I love the emphasis given to the verbs by isolating them at the end of the lines. Reminds me of T.S. Eliot’s ‘The Waste Land’.
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‘April is the cruellest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.’
They are a bit similar, just the difference being he is a great poet and that was a great poem.
Though thank you for noticing. I am trying out new forms and am glad you noticed.
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Eliot can also be bloody tedious, so keep aiming higher. 😉
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Yeah! I will. Elliot should not be the limit. :p
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Merry Christmas…
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Merry Christmas!!
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Thanks&Welcome.
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Hey, this is beautifully written.
I was just going through some of your posts. All are amazing.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Thank you so much. Happy and grateful for the love!
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You’re most welcome. 🙂
Oh, absolutely my pleasure/ 🙂
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I imagine that if this were true, he would still be kicking himself for losing you.
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Hahaha.. pleasing words 😉 :p
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Very nice way of approaching poems. Beautiful words.
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Thank you!
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Very good I absolutely love poetry and write is as well xox
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Thank you Denise. Maybe someday I will get to read your poetry as well :))
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Yes absolutely I will think of posting one soon, thanks for the follow!
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You are welcome!
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Nice art of stealing.I don’t know that we can steal this many things and be a good thief.
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Thanks Kalyan!
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Wowww!! So deep!! So lovely!! Such a beautiful post!!😍😍😍 Loved it!! It was yet another experience reading your work!
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Shukriya Parth for all the love.
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Your welcome!!😊😊
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Acha ek Baar meri new poem zaroor check kar Lena!😊😃
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/12/21/but-where-is-she/
And please do share your feedback 😊
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Sure.
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Imagination + Correct words = Brilliant feels
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Good Reader + Appreciation= Makes my day
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Powerful poem. Thanks for sharing. Life’s tough.
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Thank you for reading!
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Hey this is so freaking beautiful. I love your imaginatios!
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Imaginations.
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Thank you so much for your love. Grazie.
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It’s Devika here!
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Shikha this side.
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Oh, pardon me S. There was some overloading of comments and it accidentally got sent to you. Of course I know you well dear.
Excuse me!❤️
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Hahaha..ok. I was also a bit confused as to why you were saying that to me. But no worries.
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❤️
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Mmm, Guns’N’Roses. 😀 Memories. 😀
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Haha..yes!
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Superb.Actually splendid post.In my view you still have the most precious things with you-you have the courage and guts to allow him to steal- a stolen things never stays permanently with anyone-it will come back to you some day to give a smile on your face.
have a grt time
love and rgds
ravi
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