I am suspended from the sky
upside down
caged in my darkness
chained by my anxiety
moving to and fro
like a damaged clock
suspended in time.
Little griffons feast
on my decaying flesh
clean my bones
polish it with their spit
and my spilling blood.
—–
Something hurts.
I know it is not my broken flesh
my splattering blood
my disintegrating tissues
my tangled nerves.
Maybe my cracked soul
is trying to sew itself back together,
Maybe my brittle heart
is trying to piece itself together.
But it hurts.
—-
I am in my room
filled upto the brim with laughter and champagne
with dancing Chinese fairy lights
with peeling lemony yellow walls.
Nothing is happening but
everything is in chaos.
I am with everyone
yet lonely as a lost sparrow
watching the regale
from a hanging branch
outside the kitchen window.
—-
I can still taste the bitter blood,
smell the rotting flesh
hear the echo of my wretched scream
feel the pain of my dying emotions.
I know the symptoms
I know what will happen next
Yet I know not what to do.
It is funny like that.
—
I fold my knees and hands
in diagonal squares and wait
wait for my disintegration
wait for my decomposition.
I am lost in eerie black unknown
I am on the path to self destruction
I am struggling for my sanity
I am stagnant.
But the world is pacing
a blur before my eyes.
The noose is tightening
but the rope with which
my cage is hanging
is unravelling
thread by thread.
I know it will not be able to hold
the weight of my chaos and
will fall off
into the unknown
and I will finally be free.
But till then
it hurts.
It fucking hurts.
——
( Inspired by: Sabrina Benaim – “Explaining My Depression to My Mother”
This probably is the best you will hear about it. )
A very raw poem I felt the suffering behind your words. Hope you are in a better place, depression is a terrible thing to experience.
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Very touching poem’ loved it
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Thank You!
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Amazing
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Thanks!
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I was definitely reading the inner scream of defiance between the lines. I think my own cage is finally shattering.
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Depression ,much hyped these days ,its actually 1% medically 99% psychological
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Yes it is 99% psychological, that’s why it’s so difficult to cure. You can’t just take medications and overcome it. And I dare say those who have yet to experience it, do not understand the extremity of the situation but I truly hope they do not experience it.
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I being into psychology do say ,if you eat right ,workout ,meditate ,have sunlight and sleep well ,one can easily overcome it .
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All this would definitely help.
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A very powerful and moving piece! Wonderful word crafting! You left me so many seeds of inspiration!!! I hope I found them all! Good to shine the spotlight on this topic!!
Thanks so much for all your visits and views to spend time with my words and me!
Chuck
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Thank you for all the love. I did love your work whenever I dropped by. And very nice to meet you Chuck.
Shikha
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You are so welcome! I really appreciate your visits!!
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So sorry that you felt this way. Wishing you well.
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Thank you Bridget
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I am so grateful for this post. I’ve felt this way. I remember this from my depression, and to be able to see it expressed so accurately, and so cleanly. Well done. I’m very grateful.
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I have also been that same place one too many times. And to know that I have expressed that feeling so accurately and that resonates with you is very overwhelming. Thank you.
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I feel sometimes that depression is an exclusive club: it can nearly cost you your life, but afterwards you can find people who can say what you couldn’t, and it reminds you that not only are you not alone… but that you never actually were.
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Reblogged this on Dagget Writes.
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Thank you for reblogging!
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No problem! It was beautiful and vivid 🙂
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Grazie 🙂
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Nice to meet you.And good night sweet dreams
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Enjoyed a lot.Though it’s long it’s like a beautiful journey of words and imagery.kudos
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
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This is freaking awesome!
Dark poetry is something I relate to instantly and this emotion is so well resonated by me.
I know that emptiness and the void!
Painful yet beautiful friend.
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Thank you love!
I choose not to write dark poetry as it plays havoc on our mind. We have to be vulnerable and embrace our demons. But as you said it does have its own beauty to it.
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I totally agree.. This is an amazing and inspiring work.. I am a newbie, and my first blog was around this feeling of void and emptiness. Please do give it a read : The Hollow. Hope that you will like it.
Keep up your inspiring work 😀
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Thanks and sure. Welcome to the world of poetry and blogging. Enjoy!
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Your welcome 😊
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Brilliant!!!
Can you check out my posts too?😊
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Been there too many times, yeah just let the alchemy of the soul sow itself together for a new emergence that encompasses the deeper unloved parts of ourselves and the world!
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Really well written. Is it wrong to be in love with depression everyone so quick to wash it away. I know it hurts but it’s also beutiful like your poems. Just my thought.
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No its not. I for a fact know at it has a quite a potent attractive force to it. It’s like sweet pain. You know its not okay, but you are not quite ready to let go. You are in love with your demon.
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I hope the writing helped. Warm thoughts your way.
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It did. Thank you so much!
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best description of depression……hope its under control……….
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Yes it is. Thank you.
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You welcome
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Depression and hurt have definitely been close unwelcome friends in my life so I definitely relate, but I do have to admit that the emotion in this particular work is quite potent. It must have been a really close encounter?
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A lot of people undergo depression at some point in their life. I did too. I am happy to say that I have always had it under control, but I have a close friend who had it a bit severe so I know all about it. I know how it works, how it creeps on you silently. But the good thing is I also know how to cut its tentacles and be free. So I guess all is well.
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I agree and I think it’s a great thing to talk about it. I applaud you for doing so. I was actually thinking of working on something related to it. I’ve lost a friend to suicide because of depression and a number of classmates so anyone who brings a voice to the issue touches a piece of my heart 😊
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Thank you Eli. I think it is a rather important thing to talk about, especially due to the kind of life we are living. I really wish and hope that the stigma attached to it is removed and one day people are able to openly discuss it without feeling awkward or treating it as a anomaly.
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You and I both Shikha… Very well said. In the mean time though, let those of us with a voice use it to enlighten and educate the masses. And you’re very welcome 😊
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Yes. Exactly. 🙂
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❤
Good morning dear friend
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This is the best description of depression that I have seen! Thank you! I hope your depression is under control. 😊💛
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Thank you Walt for your love and concern. Yes it is and I truly hope it stays that way. :))
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I’m glad, and you’re very welcome 😊💛
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I liked the way you have defined Hurt.But don’t you think that getting Hurt is a must in your life because as they say ‘No Pain,No gain’.Likewise,unless you are hurt,hw will you experience its pleasure.
Love and rgds
ravi
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Ravi you are right in saying ‘No Pain, No Gain’ But here I am talking about deep rooted depression. And no one in their life should ever have to experience it. It kills you from within, makes you numb to the feelings and all you have left is a hollow shell of a mind.
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Great description of hurt, but leaves me with concern for you, hoping this is just your thoughts on hurt and not what is in your soul. Praying joy replaces the pain.
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Thank you for your concern. I am fine, I have had a close encounter with it, so I am quite familiar with the feeling.
And thank you for your blessings. May Lord shower his blessings on you too. 🙂
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Thank you, so glad to hear you have come through that with victory.
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Brilliant and powerful.
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Thank you!
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WOW. That’s a REAL description of hurt!
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Thank you 🙂
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great poem and wonderful choice of picture.
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Thank you!!
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