You poked me with needles to drill a hole into my heart
devoured my pouring blood to water your harvesting lust,
I never knew you needed my soul for your salvation
my angel to fight your demons ;
.
had I known you were the Satan’s son
devil clad in saint’s wrap-
.
had I known I was going down with you-
.
I might have picked up my own poison
understood you a bit more
loved you a bit less,
offered you my soul to feast your demons
I would have died willingly, my love
only if you had allowed me to pick my own poison.
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Made me emotional…. It’s beautifully written my friend!
Cheers, Charu ๐๐
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Thank you.
I went through your blog. Your pictures are awesome Charu ๐
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Great dark love poem. Itโs good. ๐
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Thank you. ๐
Happy that you found it good and worth commenting.
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You’re welcome anytime. ๐
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really good 1
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Thank You !
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https://sanskriti977.wordpress.com/2017/10/22/more-or-less/ please go through the post
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This is amazing!
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Thank you so much ๐
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Absolutely love this one. ๐
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So glad for the love ๐๐
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I’m always afraid to tap into the more dark and morose tone of my writing mostly because it’s requires a certain level of vulnerability and exposure, but you do it so well… I’m just going to up and say it, yeah, I envy you for that… Haha. Great read Shikha.
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Thank you.
I know. That is the most difficult part. Our whole lives we have been showing the world we are strong and then suddenly to break that barrier , it’s a task in itself. I am also a bit uncomfortable in this format but I am trying. You can’t win without taking risks, putting yourself out there so I am trying, I am learning.
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Very true… And don’t worry, you’re doing well so far
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Please don’t die! Poetry would miss you. I would miss you.
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Now she has no option but to trick death just to hear your wonderful words again. ๐
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How beautifully you carved out such a nice poem.. amazing!!
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Thank you! โบ
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